This page was reworked a bunch of times. I knew what I wanted the layout to be, but getting Olivia's face right in all the shots was very difficult for me. I'm still working very hard on getting a consistent, uniform look to my characters. Is it something that you, the reader notices a lot or am I stressing out for no reason? I'm finding the most difficult part of this process is divorcing myself from the page enough to look at it with an objective eye. We are often our own worst critics, but that also makes me freak out thinking that the work is really terrible and I'm just using that as an excuse to move on. In some regard, that is always going to be true if I hope to continue producing at a page a week. Sometime you just have to give in and abandon a page to get on to the next one. Luckily, that didn't happen here. I'm actually sort of pleased with the end result. Let me know what you think.